I think we are getting Closer – Any ideas?

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Any last minute suggestions?  I think these are close.  Positive or negative critique is OK.  I just want it good.

33 thoughts on “I think we are getting Closer – Any ideas?

  1. Hi Groovy Man! Personally, I like the second one – is there a reason tics is spelled without the k? If you don’t need that line, I would discard it. Could get lost on shirts depending on your print location. I would also discard the feather and use an apostrophe – it’s cleaner without it. When you print the shirts, I would do a left chest print only. Not a big print on the front or back. And be mindful of under arm stains showing on certain colors of shirts – black is best if you wear them while performing. Gray is bad for that… Just my two cents! Good luck with it all!

  2. I like them both. But if you’re playing around with it, have you tried making the hat, the brim, or the feather a different color? Something that pops, like red or sky blue? That way, instead of just the images to make the brand easily recognizable, a signature color would also make it stand out.

  3. Walking My Path: Mindful Wanderings in Nature

    I love it! I vote for the second one. The only minor thing I would change would be to put a sort of pen tip on the feather to make it look more like a quill than just a nice feather. It looks just great. Your hard work and thought and feedback on this has really paid off!!
    Mary

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