I agree with the third feather, but do you think it might be just a wee bit too big.
Maybe so
The third one. The big feather does it!
I like the forth. Is the feather significant? With the feather there is too much going on. If it needs to be in, perhaps put the feather in the hat. (PS I used to be a graphic designer in my earlier life)
You are probably right. I was trying to include all the elements of what this has become. It started as poetry (written word hence the feather) then I did spoken word with my son playing the piano (Song called”Plato’s Groove”). That’s where “the clock ticks . “. came from. then I gathered together some jazz friends and we started doing all of them with music and experimenting. Now we are performing live. The whole concept is that everybody has a groove that is calling them into being.
plato referred to real forms I call it the groove. I am open to any suggestion. I do words not graphics. The one with the big feather is closer to what I want than any of the others but my ego is not married to any of them. I just want it cool. Whatever I chose will be used on t-shirts. And thank very much for your input.
Feather looks good. The middle one is slightly better. Not much in it though. They’re all good!!
They set the tone!!
All the best Opher
Thank you brother
I like it. Thank you to all my friends who helped me in many ways over these months. It has been fun playing and creating things that have never been before.
Isn’t it interesting how that illustrative process works when you’re doing it with someone else. I got discouraged working with Laure on my logo for Pilgrim’s Press, but we finally got it after about 15 tries. You know I think the “rest” in the place of the apostrophe gives the wrong vibe. You don’t want to rest. You want the music to get into them and move. Another reason to like the third one better.
I agree. I think the third one is it.
Yes.The one with the big feather. You can barely tell what it is in the first one. And I like the note for the apostrophe. It looks like it has everything in it you wanted. It’s gorgeous!
You added a fourth LOL
The one I like is the 2nd from the bottom. 🙂
The big feather one? I’m leaning toward it too.
I like the middle one best! I like the feather writing the words, and seeing the notes, and it’s just all great!
Prefer the second one from the top
Very nice. I vote for #3.
I think that is where I’m heading.
The 3rd one fo sho!!!
Dat quill be a must!
I agree with the third feather, but do you think it might be just a wee bit too big.
Maybe so
The third one. The big feather does it!
I like the forth. Is the feather significant? With the feather there is too much going on. If it needs to be in, perhaps put the feather in the hat. (PS I used to be a graphic designer in my earlier life)
You are probably right. I was trying to include all the elements of what this has become. It started as poetry (written word hence the feather) then I did spoken word with my son playing the piano (Song called”Plato’s Groove”). That’s where “the clock ticks . “. came from. then I gathered together some jazz friends and we started doing all of them with music and experimenting. Now we are performing live. The whole concept is that everybody has a groove that is calling them into being.
plato referred to real forms I call it the groove. I am open to any suggestion. I do words not graphics. The one with the big feather is closer to what I want than any of the others but my ego is not married to any of them. I just want it cool. Whatever I chose will be used on t-shirts. And thank very much for your input.
Feather looks good. The middle one is slightly better. Not much in it though. They’re all good!!
They set the tone!!
All the best Opher
Thank you brother
I like it. Thank you to all my friends who helped me in many ways over these months. It has been fun playing and creating things that have never been before.
Isn’t it interesting how that illustrative process works when you’re doing it with someone else. I got discouraged working with Laure on my logo for Pilgrim’s Press, but we finally got it after about 15 tries. You know I think the “rest” in the place of the apostrophe gives the wrong vibe. You don’t want to rest. You want the music to get into them and move. Another reason to like the third one better.
I agree. I think the third one is it.
Yes.The one with the big feather. You can barely tell what it is in the first one. And I like the note for the apostrophe. It looks like it has everything in it you wanted. It’s gorgeous!
You added a fourth LOL
The one I like is the 2nd from the bottom. 🙂
The big feather one? I’m leaning toward it too.
I like the middle one best! I like the feather writing the words, and seeing the notes, and it’s just all great!